⋅ 20 November 2011

Twixt flame and claw (Haiku)

In grass fire thermals
feathers lazily fluttering
death waits in the wind

© K R Brandli 11/20/2011

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  • Great imagery in this well written haiku20 Nov 2011 by

  • Horrific to think on is this advent of nature Ken - - your title is telling and the haiku - just right.20 Nov 2011 by

  • well captured ... fascinating, recognizing that the fire will flush out prey . Predators, always looking for an edge. Good job distilling this scene into haiku form.21 Nov 2011 by

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