⋅ 3 March 2012

Thirteenth Haiku

Within stone circles
the ancient gods of the land
mock our ignorance

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  • Good one Patrick 3 Mar 2012 by

  • Solid and enjoyable haiku.....Jerry (*_*) 3 Mar 2012 by

  • clever write... how true... good one! 3 Mar 2012 by

  • So true, Patrick. Brilliant haiku! 3 Mar 2012 by

  • Don't they just Patrick! Excellent Haiku! :) kath xxx 3 Mar 2012 by

  • Patrick this sums up the force and power felt in stone circles so very well. Amazing haiku. 3 Mar 2012 by

  • at last, the true meaning of the stone circles has been brought back to us puny mortals...great depth and insightful poem, Patrick... 4 Mar 2012 by

  • Aye, methinks you have stumble upon a grain of truth, or something very like it here. Wowers. Impressive and haunting. Me likes all too well. Ah, evokes a sigh. 4 Mar 2012 by

  • wow, Patrick, this is so much more than just a haiku. a very evocative and haunting work, thank you for sharing. 5 Mar 2012 by

  • ... I can hear them laughing. Nice one. 6 Mar 2012 by

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