Freedom learned from those,
Who care not for convention,
Behind glass wall, suppose,
Confident apprehension,
But dressing to impress,
Inclusive air of shock,
Seems scary nonetheless,
Hold tide against the clock,
Peacock unopposed,
Dawn fighting back the dusk,
Conventionally unclothed,
A confusing smell of musk.
You’ve got yourself a new fan! I like your style, and how you pack a punch by using choice words that have a well-thought out purpose in how they serve your overall theme.
Thank you very much. I am so glad you liked it.
I have been playing around with less can be more of late. Sometimes I look at some pieces and on reflection find them a little verbose, even though I wrote them, so this feedback is really useful and grateful.
All the best.