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Long Illusion Opening

Silently, I bought a liar’s dream

Deep waters for stars

Serenity for success

Believing a goal is there to be reached

A life relieved of circumstance

 

Cheating myself for an extra moment of sleep

I paved my roads

But they lead only to places I hate

I cheated myself for a second of memory

For the good things they said that come

To those who wait

 

But they took our faces

They changed our names

They’ve mistaken our wishes for long, nameless hours

They burned our pages

& forsaken our songs

On graves they once dug, now they lay flowers

 

Saying prayers to concrete heavens

But we know that angels don’t live here anymore

& the limit must be the limitless sky

Of feelings that we so eagerly ignore

 

Since they reshaped our faces

& cloned our hearts

Then given back all that we’ve left to die

Mother, they’ve taken away our childhood

But they will never take us alive

 

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12 Comments

  1. “They burned our pages
    & forsaken our songs
    On graves they once dug, now they lay flowers”

    That’s what I am talking about and what I have been waiting for! And that ending my friend!! So, so, so powerful!

    • hehee.. thank you.. I hope it’s a good opening 🙂

  2. Cyrus

    I miss this. So very much. Here’s to new beginnings, my friend. Thank you for this wonderful reminder of why I’m so in love with this art.

    • Just hoping to write a lot more than I did these past few months.. Here’s to more inspiration 😉 it’s great to be here again

    • Gotta love doing that to people with just words.. Thanks, bro 🙂

  3. midnightrain

    Woah, woah, woah… That was simply so powerful. The ending really packed a punch.

    “But they will never take us alive”

    Just love this <3

    • I totally got stuck after writing this one :/ let’s hope there’s more to come tho… thank you so much <3

  4. Awesome piece! Missed your work and inspiring words. Keep up the great work and I’ll be around to keep reading.

    • Good to see you here, bro.. thanks for stopping by! 🙂

      • Thanks and you’re welcome!

  5. I can’t comment on your other poem because it says I have to be signed in when I’ve already been signed in.

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