Weary eyes crawl further into oblivion
Vast blackness
Graves reeking of sorrow
The scent of souls rotting in the depths of regret
Where pain never sleeps as death fallen minds mends
Murdered hearts with broken dreams of redemption
Fated to burn in self-kindled flames until the death of the sky
When the moons will cease their light
When mighty suns will align & collide as the sands of time transcend into higher life
That final theme of transcendence was so inspiring and uplifting – amazing structure. Never too shy to report on the darkness, with a clear mission to find the light. Solid write, in my opinion. Thank you for sharing 🙂
Enjoyed the way you weaved this together.
Very descriptive.
This piece is well written and told in way that captures the imagination of the reader. Great job on this.
“Graves reeking of sorrow” I like the way you switch things up! Very nice!