Fatigued, my body prepares to sleep
My eyelids close to build the key
That creates a portal to my dreams
And awakens my mind to an amazing scene.
A vast moonlit plain before me
A gentle wind enhances its glory
And then approaches a familiar stranger
I see no threat and feel no danger.
A new face forged from ones I’d known
And upon locking eyes his excitement had shown
“You long for this world, so step inside
Since you know my face, I’ll be your guide”
And so we began our journey there
For once in my life I was truly prepared
To see this world my mind had made
To journey through what hides from day.
We wandered for what seemed like hours
As this mighty field did boast its powers
“Take a final look and dry your tears
For next we sail your sea of fears”
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Well it’s official – I’m hooked! Way to build intrigue as amazingly as you did, brother 🙂 I look forward to the continuation!
Thank you Cyrus!
This is extraordinarily good! I really like this…Nice one!
Thank you!
amazing scene it is.. I believe it is the ambient you set up here that reminds me of some of Dio’s lyrics.. can’t wait to read the next part 🙂
Thanks Nebojsa! Can’t wait to write the next part.
Wow, this is good.
I especially like the area you left off.
Looking forward to the second part of this journey. That sea of fears is a rough one!
I too am looking forward to the sea of fears as strange as that sounds. It’s rough, but maybe not as bad as it seems!
A great way to start off a series. Pull in the reader and keep them looking for more. Way to go!
Thank you Jared!