maybe youre better off without me
i think thats better for you
i really need you
to make me feel alive
but i dont care about that now
i see a tower built out of my mistakes
and it all comes crashing down
is there something i can do
is there something i can do
is there something i can do
can i one day deserve you
i know im a complete mess
id just be poison to you
you really are better off without me
but i cant go on without you
this life is all ive got
when i see my situation
youre the only shining spot
i know im in love with you
i know im in love with you
i know im in love with you
but i cant do that to you
Wow this is powerful! The emotions leap out at me here. Well done!
im glad my words communicated what they were meant to
Loved the repetition, & the ending.
Nicely penned.
many thanks, friend.