Once upon a time I just couldn’t find my way.
Lost and confused. Didn’t want to face the day.
Once upon a time there was a girl so depressed.
With weight upon her shoulders, she felt like such a mess.
We had a thing in common. We both searched for love.
Praying night and day to the heavenly man above.
Once upon a time it happened by chance.
Boy meets girl. Both meets romance.
Loneliness has fled. No more crying hurtful tears.
No more fearing the night, nor wandering through the years.
No more stress night and day. No more pressure in the way.
No more crying self to sleep, nor fear of facing another day.
No more stress, pain, worry, crying, no, not even sighing.
Casting all our fears aside. No more fearing of the dying.
Here we are in the field as we sit and gaze above.
Starry eyes we stare into. Oh I think I’ve found my love!
No more pain we have to face. No more trouble in our sight.
On a natural high we are. Babe, the stars are ours tonight!
The uplifting tone and imagery compliment each other nicely here! Great rhyme and flow as always make an excellent poem Jarid!
Thanks! Didn’t know where I was going with this one. I just let the poem create itself.
What a difference a day makes!
Extremely uplifting piece of writing, J-rid.
Never let go of the stars. ✨
Thank you! Right, the stars are yours. Always reach for it I say!
A beautiful write, my friend. I’m so glad to have stumbled on to it. Better late than never. Thank you so much for sharing this!
Thanks CY! I haven’t been on here for awhile. Always a pleasure hearing from you!
This is truly amazing. Such a beautiful write!! Thank you for this, it was deff worth the read!!
Thank you Dillion! Means a lot. Appreciate it!