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now i feel naught
so much hurt and pain
you gave me nothing but
your love.
and now i feel naught of
my weary past
such gruesome solitude,
but i found in you
happiness – you came
when i searched for
you, you came.

each road taken, each choice made
that i regret
you took them all away
i’ve had nothing
but eversince you came
i felt complete.

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done? now read from the bottom up. 🙂

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3 Comments

  1. Great use of language to present the message both ways. This was really well-written, and don’t worry – I knew to read it backwards because of the title itself 😉 Thanks for sharing!

  2. Clever, from top to bottom positive, from bottom to top maybe even more realistic.

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