i wanna SCREAM
im gonna bolt
im going insane
this pattern cant hold
im gonna BREAK
a matter of time
i dont have a watch
dont want a reminder
that im on a timer
of self destruction
in the healthiest way possible
that’s right
i cant get my lazy ass
to stop doing work
breaking point
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“i dont have a watch
dont want a reminder
that im on a timer”
Excellent wordplay!
Enjoyed the entire piece, but this really stood out, for me.
Well done!
thanks, that means a lot coming from you!
nice juxtaposition of word and idea
thanks
I hate when I get in those patterns.
You penned it right on! tfs
thanks!