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Help Me Find My Way Out

Take my silence one step too far
Take my violence and tear me apart
Your words are the cure I need
Your love is where my heart will feed

Indiscriminate demons fill my head
They try to tie my to my bed

The flame in my heart
is a smoulder
The only blame falls
on my shoulders

Help me find my way out
My eyes show only doubt
Help me find my way out
My eyes show only doubt

I’m pushing back the battle lines
Trying to capture all the lost time
This is just a forlorn endeavor
Forever severed whenever I fall

Help me find my way out
My eyes show only doubt
Help me find my way out
My eyes show only doubt

The flame
is a smoulder
The blame
on my shoulders
I don’t surrender
I don’t surrender
I don’t surrender
I DON’T SURRENDER

Help me find my way out
I don’t surrender
My eyes show only doubt
I don’t surrender
Help me find my way out
I don’t surrender
My eyes show only doubt
I don’t surrender

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6 Comments

  1. Naively penned, my friend!
    I enjoyed your rhyme scheme.

  2. Well penned… “Your words are the cure I need
    Your love is where my heart will feed” such a beautiful line.

  3. This would make an excellent song! I felt a rhythmic, rocky vibe. Well done!

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