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Relinquish

Sad little creature

Forlorn little beast

Alone you lie

Solitary as you are

 

 

Give up Give Up GIVE UP!

 

Pain becomes you

Hurt defines you

So it is

And forever shall be

 

Join….NOW!

Surrender….NOW!

Relinquish….NOW!

The entirety of your being!

 

Your life is a sinking boat

A sick and twisted little joke

Through ember, flame and blinding smoke

Your end, my song does still evoke

 

You broken child

You withered heart

So much ennui,

Consumed by woe

 

Come on Come On COME ON!

 

My melody means to end your grief

A somber tune to end your sorrow

And with that knife you’ll suffer no longer

One last scream to bring you peace

 

Join….NOW

Surrender….NOW

Relinquish….NOW

Your worldly skin and weary mind

 

This blade can finally set you free

To set you adrift upon the breeze

Ignore regret as you now freeze

And the blood flows forth like raging seas.

 

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4 Comments

  1. Enjoyed the repetition of this piece.

    Especially liked these lines;

    “Your life is a sinking boat

    A sick and twisted little joke

    Through ember, flame and blinding smoke

    Your end, my song does still evoke”

    Damn.. 👍👍

    • Thanks man! The rhyming lines were meant to be the center where all the previous stanzas built up too so I’m glad you liked that part!

  2. NB NB

    ugh, this one’s dangerous..and though the ‘blade’ part in the end is almost like a shadow over everything else, the imagery is deeper than it seems at first.. awesome!

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