I’m scared of who I am,
Who I might become,
The person residing in my head,
In the near future,
And the far one.
I lack the talent,
To write this one.
I leave it to the currents,
To drown out my struggles,
To paralyze my fears,
Till the dread
Becomes subtle.
I focus on the sunset,
The vision far ahead,
I sing along to a record,
and mute the radio
in my head.
‘Cause if it were up to me,
I’d mess it all up.
I’d add a lot of yellow,
In fear it’s not enough.
I’d punch my expression
right out of my face.
And rehearse my reactions,
For every single case.
I’m scared of who I am,
Who I might not become,
The roads gone untraveled,
The wasted settings
of the sun.
In my chase to have it all,
I became a master of none.
somehow the entire poem seems like a play of 0 & 1.. the structure is also interesting, & it even makes it easy to read, which is often necessary for meaningful poems in order to be understood better.. & one part really stood out :
“The roads gone untraveled,
The wasted settings
of the sun.”
very well done!
Really appreciate your comment :))
Nicely worded and rhymed and yes a nice flow.
I really enjoyed reading this verse. I don’t think I got the meaning of everything, but that doesn’t matter, the journey was grand anyway.
You got some great lines and you voice your concerns well
in this composition.