The oceanz a lunatic who is addicted to the moonz every movement though she doesnt know he existz, so after her he swimz, after her attention but all she seez in him is her lonely reflection, but this rejection doesnt just affect him but the wind too, for she lovez the ocean just az much az he lovez the moon, and though she moanz az she strokez his skin and makez wavez, with every stolen kiss, swept up in his mist, shez alwayz next to him, but like the moon to the ocean he doesnt know she existz, and such ignorance bringz sorrowz sweet kiss, so when when the wind seez the moon all she seez is a fat bitch
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wow I was reading this thinking king is sounding kinda traditional in a new way and then the ending! perfect. really great use of metaphor with the ocean and the moon with your own unique writing style giving it a fresh kick
ha thankz dude, this is how I used to write
wtf I didn’t expect that ending lol.. dope stuff..
haha yeah, itz a plot twist lop thankz for reading yo!
Awesome piece and the ending cracked me up! lol
ha itz what I do baby
Damn, bro ..
You had to do her, like that!? 😂😂😂
ha yup, every love triangle has at least one casualty 🙁