Love is complex
But oh, so, obvious
And when it’s all going right
Is when you both feel godliest
And you dance around each other
Planets around the sun
So, committed to making it work
But when things go south,
He’s just such a jerk!
And she’s just such a bitch
Self-absorbed, and short tempered
Breathe and she’ll burn you
Third degree with the fire in her eye.
And you’re walking out just to slam the door
To say I’m done
when you brush against her arm
And it’s like water on fire
You can hear the hiss
The chemical reaction brings up tears to the surface of her eyes
You turn around and tell her you love her.
She breaks down, cries.
And like that it’s over and you sit down
Once more point out your flaws and you both say
I’m sorry
‘it’s my fault’ ‘No, it’s my fault’
The magma spills through the fissure in the plates
It cools and creates basalt.
The foundations we will build our life on.
And when we just sit,
Not talking.
Not touching,
And miles away
And I imagine our house with the beautiful stone
Pillars.
The pillars with carving that you would have done
With love and precision.
Those pillars that will hold up our hearts
When they drop at the sound of bad news.
Love is complex
But oh, so obviously here
And when you hold me
Everything beautiful I want to tell you
Gets stuck in my throat.
I wrote this to tell you how
You are everything that is beautiful.
-for Miley
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I like the way you wove this together.
Love this:
“And you dance around each other
Planets around the sun”
Thank you for reading and commenting 😁
That ending got me in the feels!
Great piece of writing.
“And it’s like water on fire” – Love that feeling.
Thanks a bunch! This piece is very personalized with real elements. I was aiming to capture nature in love and the ups and downs. I’m really glad you like it!
I like the very bottom ” for Miley” it’s always great to be able to have a poem written to speak to someone special in your life. I also liked
‘it’s my fault’ ‘No, it’s my fault’
The magma spills through the fissure in the plates
It cools and creates basalt.
The foundations we will build our life on.
That has to be the foundation that love gets built on! All other foundations will be like sand. Nice work!