Notebook filled with paper,
empty feelings, fill ’em later
Livin darker’, bats in belfry,
not a campy vigilante
Human torch? You ignite her?
Peter Parker, mind is sharper,
human spider! You inside her
with your side chick right beside her
Channel my thoughts
through the mental cable
Read the label, clear instructions,
fearin’ the abduction
check the truck with any luck, many bucks!
Ain’t no need to duck illicitly!
Visit my physician! Dr. Griffin’s on a mission
never listens, writes a list of bad prescriptions
had a vision, told me “hit the deck!”
So high I could fly a jet!
Oh my! What a side effect!
Oh my! What did I expect!?
And my life expectancy
since infancy been finicky
The devil has it in for me!
And mentally, feelin’ sentimental
it’s essential, and the order is sequential
check my flow as elemental
Somebody come an’ save me
‘fore I go an’ catch a body
at the lobby like a hobby,
actin’ shady, call me crazy!
I’m afraid of feelin’ lonely… hold me baby:
My worst critic’s been me lately (That’s harsh).
My worst critic’s been me lately (You sure?)
My worst critic’s been me lately (Sit this one out, man.)
Awesome one. You never lose your touch. You’re the worst critic? I will dare and give you some advice, read your poetry as if it was written by someone else. By Rome, by Nebo, by me, read it with the same kindness and you will end up realising how great of a poet you are. One of the best I’ve ever read.
… you know what makes it one of the best? well, everything, but the most important thing is this ingenious otherworldly flow – believe me, I listened (and still do) to a lot of rap, but I never found anything such as this, ’cause you add just a few more poetic elements than others, and those two are perfectly balanced.. it’s a puzzle, and you made the pieces fit, that’s it..
Agreed
Love this