I watch her as she close her eyes,
she cries in discreet.
The rain had finally stops,
so as her heartbeat.
Her suffering ended,
and we could finally meet.
Finally
I watch her as she close her eyes,
she cries in discreet.
The rain had finally stops,
so as her heartbeat.
Her suffering ended,
and we could finally meet.
Short, but direct!
Enjoyed this.
I love the dream like atmosphere! Just want to let you know, on the third line it says “the rain had finally stops”.
Other than that, excellent write!