Party with my friends
we’re drunk and we’re high
Part-time employment
is how we get by
Looking for trouble,
we’re happy to try
Pray that we make it to twenty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh, Whoa
We make it to twenty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh oh oh (oh oh oh)
College tuition
I’m not gonna lie
My rainy day funds
are now running dry
Momma wants grand kids
and begs ’til she cries
Pray that I make it to thirty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh, Whoa
I make it to thirty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh oh oh (oh oh oh)
She’s with her friends
on the 4th of July
Blind dates are forced
but at least there’s a guy
Marriage is broken
and she wonders why…
Pray that she makes it to forty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh, Whoa
She makes it to forty
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh oh oh (oh oh oh)
F*ck the aesthetics
just have a good time
Live for the moment
to prosper and shine
Thankful for friendships,
and trust is divine…
…just remember to love every
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh, whoa
Be sure to love every
ONE, ONE, ONE
Whoa oh oh oh (oh oh oh)
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Wow this is epic! Love how you threw in your own lyrics in this. I was feeling this the whole way through. You’ve captured the flow, feel and imagery in this piece. Superb!
Thanks so much for the review, my friend 🙂 Glad it caught you and managed to hold on to you for as long as it did. I appreciate your support as always!
I go away for a while and when back I see that you flew to whole different level. I am amazed. Truly. Thanks for the track, I didn’t know it, it’s dope. Fit your writing.
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Happy to share 🙂 Good to see you!
hey man.. did anyone tell you you’re a bad writer? oh right, I already know the answer..
Rome had one yesterday, & now you’ve got one as well.. I know you know what I mean.. its just that words don’t like me, so they’re hard to find..
Well here’s hoping that you and words find one another again 😉 haha I’m sure I know what you mean. Honestly I feel as if my writing has improved, but my confidence has diminished. I hardly pull the trigger with those two factors, but I take the chance, and this community helps as well 😛 Thanks for your continued support, brother!
Where I’m from, this is called a “banger”!
Throw some bass behind it, with a beat.
You’ve got yourself a hood classic!
I deff bopped my head the woke way through.
Glad to hear it, brother – I really appreciate your continued support. Thanks so much!
. Good writing.Love is always popular. I noticed the comment concerning woeking part time and hoping to survive
The reality for a lot of us, I imagine. Thanks so much for reading good sir!
Nice! It’s cool to see you creating lyrics in addition to your regular poetry and I always thought some of your poems had a song like quality to them! Well done Cyrus!
Thank you kindly brother! You’re right about the music inspiration. Helps with the flow of words 🙂