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Waimea (I see).

I see.

Two hands holding
O’ mainland lovers
Came for the beauty
Stayed for each other

Two small birds play
O’ rocky ground
The songs they sing
Dance in & around

Two waves rolling
O’ Oahu sands
While hills wave
Along on lands

Two palms sit
O’ the end of one hill
Where we’re watching
From a sugarcane field

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3 Comments

  1. This is constructed masterfully! The rhymes, the language, the rhythm, all amazing!

  2. Wow I really enjoyed this read. Clearly song lyrics waiting to be mastered and heard. Thank you so much for sharing!

  3. Felt the rhythm in this the whole way.
    I enjoyed your word choice.

    Nicely penned.

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