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Soaked in Paradise

I wish to travel to the shimmering light of paradise,
Where the cool swish of blissful ocean fills the air,
As I dip my hands into the waves, they caress the beach with beautiful precision,
My feet will kiss the warmth of the sand, as I grab hold of your hand.

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  1. Really hits home to all unknown parts. Awake to the tenndency to dream to sing a tender song. As the tender lying of the fawn out on the lawm. Words that breath a nostalgic portion in its meaning. You have created a charming presentation to its flow. First off i like the line pattern to this remarkable piece. Words can uplift these are touching that you exhibit. Further, you have given a chance for the reader to breath. Let go of any harm that may come up. Very deep piece you got here. Lastly, you covered all bases very good. Poet Mario William Vitale

    • Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, I enjoyed reading them and appreciate the time you took to post that :)!

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