Pink
“O, such a lovely little flower bud in our family tree!
How wonderful she will be!”
Dolls
“O, how pretty and tall I’ll be, so true!”
There’s glitter in its shoe.
Panties
“O, how freely I can move, yet how and why
The pattern draws an eye…?”
Drama
“O, I thought you loved me, Jack!”
He’s never coming back.
PMS
“O, I thought you missed me, Jake!”
She forgot to hit the brake(?)
Wrinkles
“O, such a strong and mighty thing I was!”
In the mirror, such a one does.
i really enjoyed this. the modular construction struck a chord, like visible seasons. also, woudlnt it be PDPDPW not DPDPDW?
Actually, yes. It’s embarrassing, really…normally I’m just verbally dyslexic instead of the actual documented kind. Thank you 🙂
no worries, i actually have dyslexia too so i stared at it for like ten minutes to make sure i was reading it right 😅.
Love the structure of this. Nicely penned!
Cheshire beat me to my initial comment.
This was different, in a positive way.
The way you laid this out caughtmy attention immediately.
Nicely penned!