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Bitching in Rhymes

Let there be night, finally, for today overflowed. 

Gracious dusk, indulge me, walk me down forget road.

Morpheus did get bored with that bedtime story

And argued the sandman into unfriending me.

 

Can some pills do the job, override the restraints?

I took ten in a row to free my dreams in chains.

Guilty I, took no time to read the instructions;

Side effects striking hard, self imposed destruction.


No song can lull me back to when times were easy,

When I needed nothing and won effortlessly

At this game we call life whose rules I just ignored.

That’s how I piled the faults and set a world record…


Wait a minute, what am I writing here? This is not who I am, this ain’t me…


This is not poetry, this is bitching in rhymes,

My brain, smart enemy, brought me there oftentimes;

My questions, loud burden, tried to stifle my heart;

An inside job indeed, should have known from the start.

 

Time has come for my pen to reach its potential,

Write a better story, it has the credentials;

Turn the back on what “is” and its complexity,

Life changing equation simplified thoroughly.

 

The thoughts are clearing up, at last I understand,

Never needed no pill, the answer was at hand.

I will make a pillow out of this reasoning

For you see, all it took, was to stop complaining.

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9 Comments

  1. I wanted to compare it to a time machine, each stanza being a portal into different worlds, based on a different kind of writing (I don’t know if anyone noticed how, but each stanza is special in it’s own way).. but then, a “rhyme machine” sounds a lot better, and it’s closer to what I wanted to say.. yea, I know you get it 😀

  2. Cyrus

    Good to see this my friend 🙂 As I had stated to NB, here’s to new beginnings. I look forward to reading more of your work!

  3. midnightrain

    I also noticed what NB did. That was so creative and it gave more flesh to your poem. I’m still blown away by what I read so I’m going to go read it again!

    • Thanks for Reading, I’m so happy to see you again and can’t wait to read your always amazing work

  4. Yo!

    “Bitching in rhyme” – I do it ALL THE TIME!

    I absolutely loved the flow of this. And the message was right down my alley.

    • We’re back! It’s like before, the interaction is the fuel I needed, thank you my friend

  5. Great poem with lots to say. I think sometimes ‘bitching’ in rhymes can be very therapeutic!

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