Waiting.
My heart; it’s yours for the taking
the patience; it runs, it withers
I look at you, your mind begins to slither
slow and enticing;
my mind; the excitement
these worlds, how they divide us
anger and hatred, I deplore
those words of silence, I adore
within your eyes; i see the void
your soul, it views, my heart as the toy
It walks, it crawls
it covers, it carries, it consumes
i can hardly see, I’m dominatrix
though I submit
my legs; they quiver
my heart, oh
how it begins to shiver !
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This is some incredible wordplay right here – amazing write 🙂 keep this going!
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I like the style in which this was written. You’ve given me such a great read. Awesome work.
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“I’m dominatrix
though I submit”
Y’don’t see that too often. This line brought everything together, for me.
Powerful piece of writing.
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