Adorned in scabs and faded scars
You swore you’d never let it go this far
And friends aren’t who they say they are
in this pathetic life
You haven’t eaten, haven’t slept
The clothes you wear are all that’s left
Your other stuff – you lost to theft
and this pathetic life
Steal from family just the same
dishonesty’s your middle name
and all the pawn shops know your game
in this pathetic life
A hopeful end you swear you’re done
Oh look! Here comes another one
You’ll do just ONE MORE HIT for fun
in this pathetic life
Your time’s run out your needle’s bent
Your friends have left, your money’s spent
Your dope was your own detriment
in this pathetic life
Powerful piece of writing.
Enjoyed your point of view, & rhyme scheme.
Nicely penned, my friend!
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I enjoyed this poem; the theme, the flow the rhyme very well penned.
I appreciate the feedback