Immortal ripples kiss my blues
Eternally my plight
The flame I lay to rest rests in a crevice in my mind
The flame I lay to rest rests til the blackness grips the night
Condemned within the rifts of time it’s visage holds no light
Fury in it’s eyes
A darkness tinted flame
Engraved within it’s veins a scarlet X above my name
Engraved within it’s deadly gaze the oath “Eternal Pain”
“It’s time to hear your cries”
“It’s time for feeble pleas”
“It’s time to feel your spirit burn in flames I have conceived“
“My love was always true”
“I loved you, O’ so deep”
“I held the the rose of purity & fell down at your feet”
“But.. you..
deceived me..”
“I fell prey to the web”
“Woven with the poison sowing seeds inside your head”
“Majestically complex”
“It’s promise, O’ so sweet”
“But hidden in it’s chambers lay the fatal fangs of death”
“The death of innocence”
“The death of purity”
“Reserved for me…”
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Great use of language, excellent rhyme and fantastic rhythm! A masterfully constructed poem with a powerful message. I love the imagery it creates and the emotions they evoke! Very very well done!
“My love was always true”
“I loved you, O’ so deep”
“I held the the rose of purity & fell down at your feet” – Beautiful!
Absolutely love this.
Excellent job, my friend.
Epic work, much enjoyed.
Your word choice, the flow, everything about this one I love.