I see you. Yes, sweet you.
Can you feel my stare?
I often dream. Dream of you.
Just say that you’ll be there.
Here’s a diamond. You’re my pearl.
Here’s a rose for you.
Take my hand. Here I am.
I have a crush on you.
Write you poems. Write you letters.
Anything for you.
I dream at night. Dream of you.
Just ask me and I’ll do.
I want to kiss. Hold you tight.
Spin your world around.
There’s a puddle. Here’s my jacket.
Now you’re on dry ground.
Hold me close. Feel my warmth.
My heart beats just for you.
You’re my space and my world.
I have a crush on you.
Very sweet and heart warming! It’s to the point and it really works here Jarid!
Thanks! One of those poems I was trying a different style with at the time. Appreciate your kind feedback!
Aww, how sweet :3 Classic and unique at the same time, well penned!
Thank you Destiny! Sweet of you to say. Appreciate it!
I like the direct approach.
I’d be interested in seeing her reaction.
Nicely penned, indeed, Brother!
Thanks bro. Looking at it now it’s very direct and the picture I chose is how it would be done. Sneak up behind your crush, hold her and recite these words. Good looking out Rome!
A very beautifully written piece. Really sweet and it has that innocence and sweetness of young love. Really good. Loved it
Appreciate you taking the time to read and leaving feedback. Many thanks to you Poet!
You hand me that poem and ask who wrote it and I’ll say your name Jarid. You have your unique style and I am a first hour fan.
Wow thanks Kadavez! I’m humbled by your feedback. That means a lot! Appreciate ya!
I agree with Rome – the direct approach is often always best.
Just wow 🙂 I enjoyed the read all the way through, my friend 🙂
Thank you CY! Always a pleasure hearing from you bro.