i remember how
i drew you with a kiss
my lips met yours
making me crash into this
making you my reality
yet i got caught in
some fantasy
and i think i got abandoned there
light glares into my eye
and i see our demise
the way i blocked the colors
from our life
the way i promised i’d never
say goodbye
rationally,
i know that nothing
means nothing
but you were everything
and i’m stuck lying
and saying you were nothing
rationally,
i knew it wasn’t going to last
i guess you’ve joined
my long dark past
i guess the stars weren’t in line
i guess love feeds the blind
maybe love just drove right by
strolled past us, our hands
weren’t intertwined
and we never met it outside
never caught it to drag on
our ride
i suppose that’s when hearts
collide
guess that means we
wasted our time
guess that you wrote yourself a soul
after i poured out mine
i tore the pictures
broke the mirrors
lost myself in fears of
losing myself
with you
i guess i should have
kept my words inside
‘cept i threw ’em on
an electric chair to fry
damn
Some grand lines in this verse, these I very much like for their cleverness: i know that nothing
means nothing
but you were everything
thank you plenty my friend
This whole thing is amazing, loved it, some very powerful and original lines.
“guess that you wrote yourself a soul
after i poured out mine”
Honestly, I’d been saving that line for something for quite sometime because it popped into my head and I thought it was super dope and then when I was writing this I saw a spot I could shove it in at, I have a lot of little blurbs that I like to find places for in my poetry.
Yeah, I know exactly what you mean. Ciao!